diff --git a/src/applications/differential/edge/DifferentialRevisionDependedOnByRevisionEdgeType.php b/src/applications/differential/edge/DifferentialRevisionDependedOnByRevisionEdgeType.php
--- a/src/applications/differential/edge/DifferentialRevisionDependedOnByRevisionEdgeType.php
+++ b/src/applications/differential/edge/DifferentialRevisionDependedOnByRevisionEdgeType.php
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
     $add_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s added %s dependent revision(s): %s.',
+      '%s added %s child revision(s): %s.',
       $actor,
       $add_count,
       $add_edges);
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
     $rem_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s removed %s dependent revision(s): %s.',
+      '%s removed %s child revision(s): %s.',
       $actor,
       $rem_count,
       $rem_edges);
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
     $rem_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s edited dependent revision(s), added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.',
+      '%s edited child revision(s), added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.',
       $actor,
       $add_count,
       $add_edges,
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
     $add_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s added %s dependent revision(s) for %s: %s.',
+      '%s added %s child revision(s) for %s: %s.',
       $actor,
       $add_count,
       $object,
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
     $rem_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s removed %s dependent revision(s) for %s: %s.',
+      '%s removed %s child revision(s) for %s: %s.',
       $actor,
       $rem_count,
       $object,
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
     $rem_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s edited dependent revision(s) for %s, added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.',
+      '%s edited child revision(s) for %s, added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.',
       $actor,
       $object,
       $add_count,
diff --git a/src/applications/differential/edge/DifferentialRevisionDependsOnRevisionEdgeType.php b/src/applications/differential/edge/DifferentialRevisionDependsOnRevisionEdgeType.php
--- a/src/applications/differential/edge/DifferentialRevisionDependsOnRevisionEdgeType.php
+++ b/src/applications/differential/edge/DifferentialRevisionDependsOnRevisionEdgeType.php
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
     $add_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s added %s dependencie(s): %s.',
+      '%s added %s parent revision(s): %s.',
       $actor,
       $add_count,
       $add_edges);
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
     $rem_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s removed %s dependencie(s): %s.',
+      '%s removed %s parent revision(s): %s.',
       $actor,
       $rem_count,
       $rem_edges);
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
     $rem_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s edited dependencie(s), added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.',
+      '%s edited parent revision(s), added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.',
       $actor,
       $add_count,
       $add_edges,
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
     $add_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s added %s dependencie(s) for %s: %s.',
+      '%s added %s parent revision(s) for %s: %s.',
       $actor,
       $add_count,
       $object,
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
     $rem_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s removed %s dependencie(s) for %s: %s.',
+      '%s removed %s parent revision(s) for %s: %s.',
       $actor,
       $rem_count,
       $object,
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@
     $rem_edges) {
 
     return pht(
-      '%s edited dependencie(s) for %s, added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.',
+      '%s edited parent revision(s) for %s, added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.',
       $actor,
       $object,
       $add_count,
diff --git a/src/infrastructure/internationalization/translation/PhabricatorUSEnglishTranslation.php b/src/infrastructure/internationalization/translation/PhabricatorUSEnglishTranslation.php
--- a/src/infrastructure/internationalization/translation/PhabricatorUSEnglishTranslation.php
+++ b/src/infrastructure/internationalization/translation/PhabricatorUSEnglishTranslation.php
@@ -595,70 +595,80 @@
         '%s changed files, attached: %3$s; detached: %5$s.',
 
 
-      '%s added %s dependencie(s): %s.' => array(
+      '%s added %s parent revision(s): %s.' => array(
         array(
-          '%s added a dependency: %3$s.',
-          '%s added dependencies: %3$s.',
+          '%s added a parent revision: %3$s.',
+          '%s added parent revisions: %3$s.',
         ),
       ),
 
-      '%s added %s dependencie(s) for %s: %s.' => array(
+      '%s added %s parent revision(s) for %s: %s.' => array(
         array(
-          '%s added a dependency for %3$s: %4$s.',
-          '%s added dependencies for %3$s: %4$s.',
+          '%s added a parent revision for %3$s: %4$s.',
+          '%s added parent revisions for %3$s: %4$s.',
         ),
       ),
 
-      '%s removed %s dependencie(s): %s.' => array(
+      '%s removed %s parent revision(s): %s.' => array(
         array(
-          '%s removed a dependency: %3$s.',
-          '%s removed dependencies: %3$s.',
+          '%s removed a parent revision: %3$s.',
+          '%s removed parent revisions: %3$s.',
         ),
       ),
 
-      '%s removed %s dependencie(s) for %s: %s.' => array(
+      '%s removed %s parent revision(s) for %s: %s.' => array(
         array(
-          '%s removed a dependency for %3$s: %4$s.',
-          '%s removed dependencies for %3$s: %4$s.',
+          '%s removed a parent revision for %3$s: %4$s.',
+          '%s removed parent revisions for %3$s: %4$s.',
         ),
       ),
 
-      '%s edited dependencie(s), added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.' => array(
-        '%s edited dependencies, added: %3$s; removed: %5$s.',
+      '%s edited parent revision(s), added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.' => array(
+        '%s edited parent revisions, added: %3$s; removed: %5$s.',
       ),
 
-      '%s edited dependencie(s) for %s, added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.' => array(
-        '%s edited dependencies for %s, added: %3$s; removed: %5$s.',
+      '%s edited parent revision(s) for %s, '.
+      'added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.' => array(
+        '%s edited parent revisions for %s, added: %3$s; removed: %5$s.',
       ),
 
-      '%s added %s dependent revision(s): %s.' => array(
+      '%s added %s child revision(s): %s.' => array(
         array(
-          '%s added a dependent revision: %3$s.',
-          '%s added dependent revisions: %3$s.',
+          '%s added a child revision: %3$s.',
+          '%s added child revisions: %3$s.',
         ),
       ),
 
-      '%s added %s dependent revision(s) for %s: %s.' => array(
+      '%s added %s child revision(s) for %s: %s.' => array(
         array(
-          '%s added a dependent revision for %3$s: %4$s.',
-          '%s added dependent revisions for %3$s: %4$s.',
+          '%s added a child revision for %3$s: %4$s.',
+          '%s added child revisions for %3$s: %4$s.',
         ),
       ),
 
-      '%s removed %s dependent revision(s): %s.' => array(
+      '%s removed %s child revision(s): %s.' => array(
         array(
-          '%s removed a dependent revision: %3$s.',
-          '%s removed dependent revisions: %3$s.',
+          '%s removed a child revision: %3$s.',
+          '%s removed child revisions: %3$s.',
         ),
       ),
 
-      '%s removed %s dependent revision(s) for %s: %s.' => array(
+      '%s removed %s child revision(s) for %s: %s.' => array(
         array(
-          '%s removed a dependent revision for %3$s: %4$s.',
-          '%s removed dependent revisions for %3$s: %4$s.',
+          '%s removed a child revision for %3$s: %4$s.',
+          '%s removed child revisions for %3$s: %4$s.',
         ),
       ),
 
+      '%s edited child revision(s), added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.' => array(
+        '%s edited child revisions, added: %3$s; removed: %5$s.',
+      ),
+
+      '%s edited child revision(s) for %s, '.
+      'added %s: %s; removed %s: %s.' => array(
+        '%s edited child revisions for %s, added: %3$s; removed: %5$s.',
+      ),
+
       '%s added %s commit(s): %s.' => array(
         array(
           '%s added a commit: %3$s.',